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Post by Snowberry on Feb 23, 2011 13:56:49 GMT -5
YOU WOULD NOT BELIEVE YOUR EYESif ten million fireflies lit upTHE WORLD AS I FELL ASLEEP The huge trees around Zestypaw loomed over him, the wind blew his tabby striped pelt making him feel cold. He was alone in collecting herbs, something he enjoyed doing just as long as he had a song in his mind. But today? No song. Nothing at all. And so, collecting herbs now was going to be rather boring. Yawning, he smelt the air for any hints of herbs. He picked up the smell of honey not so far away.
Zestypaw's ears picked up at this fact. It was very rare to find Honey now a days. Honey was great for cats who had sore throats and for those who wanted a little treat. If he could just find it...
Running he followed the sweet trail of honey which made his mouth water. Finally he found himself looking up a huge oak tree with branches as huge as a cat. Zestypaw gasped as he told in the tree. Where was that honey? Looking along every branch he spotted the honey. With a purr, he began planing the best way for him to climb. He could hear the voice of his mother telling him not to climb it but it was honey! You never get honey!
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Post by Stella on Feb 23, 2011 16:25:48 GMT -5
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Ivoryflower was a little worried, her small baby had started his apprenticeship just two moons ago. She knew he would be fine but it still worried her very much, Specially in the fact that he could never have kits of his own. She always wanted to be a grandma, but she was still young and it could happen one day.
The small old ivory colored she-cat moved on, running threw the woods. She was looking for a mouse, or vole, maybe even a bird, But for now she was thinking to much, being too distracted and well she has found nothing yet. Her large eyes could see something though, a few fox tail lengths away, climbing up a tree. What was that?
The she-cat slowed down and looked up as she got closer, her huge green eyes even wider as she saw who it was. ''ZESTYPAW! What on earth are you doing?!?!'', the she-cat was so scared, her little boy was so high! And what was he doing there, with out Willownight. Was he trying to kill himself? Plus he was young and not even a warrior! The she-cat was having a small panic attack, but she truly wanted Zestypaw down.
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Post by Snowberry on Feb 25, 2011 10:29:45 GMT -5
YOU WOULD NOT BELIEVE YOUR EYESif ten million fireflies lit upTHE WORLD AS I FELL ASLEEP Zestypaw's claws dug into the tree as he began climbing the huge tree. He wasn't worried about falling or anything, he had climb trees before! His face rubbed agaist the bark once or twice, making it sore. But the apprentice didn't seem to care. He was doing great until the yowl of a cat started him. "ZESTYPAW! What on earth are you doing?!?!' The yowl had started so that he let go on the tree falling with a bump onto the forest, muddy ground.
Getting up he shake his sore body and looked towards the cat who yowled at him. The cat who yowled at him was infact his adoptive mother, who had creamy fur which could be mistaken for white. "What do you think I was doing?" He meowed alittle annoyed from the fall. "I was climbing the tree so then I could get that honey," He pointed at the yellow, hive in the tree with his tail. "And I have climb trees before so theres no worrys." He tried his hardess not to snap at his dear mother but mud, leaves and twigs were sticking into his skin and it only made his mood worst than what it was. He also annoyed because he had wanted to prove to his mentor that he could do things with out her and she didn't need to hold his paw all the time.
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Post by Stella on Feb 25, 2011 14:47:05 GMT -5
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Ivoryflower was nervous, plus she must have startled him. Zestypaw started to fall down the tree landing with a bump onto the forest, muddy ground. The she-cat sighed, she moved forward, shaking her head. Her little man was all muddy, his beautiful Mackerel tabby body hidden by sticks and gunk. She felt bad, he did seem to be doing so well as a medicine cat apprentice, but it worried her when he had to go to great heights, literally, to get herbs and such.
She moved closer and picked some of the sticks out, hopping he was not too mad. "What do you think I was doing?" He meowed a little annoyed from the fall. "I was climbing the tree so then I could get that honey," He pointed at the yellow, hive in the tree with his tail. "And I have climb trees before so theres no worrys." She nodded, not sure what to say. ''I trust you Zestypaw, but as a mom i get worried, and well you see what happens''. She looked up at the bee hive again, wondering how many bees where there to attack them, ready to sting.
She looked and him, and licked a paw, getting a bit of mud out of her own fur. ''Would you like some help with the mud and gunk?''. Ivoryflower was never and will never be ready to see her little tom grow. He was alone now, learning his job, but she still could not believe it, the small brown tom. Was now a man.
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Post by Snowberry on Feb 27, 2011 14:48:55 GMT -5
YOU WOULD NOT BELIEVE YOUR EYESif ten million fireflies lit upTHE WORLD AS I FELL ASLEEP Zestypaw didn't say anything as his mother helped him get out twigs from his pelt which felt like thorns digging into his skin. ' I trust you Zestypaw, but as a mom i get worried, and well you see what happens' his mother meowed looking at the hive as she did this, Zestypaw could guess that she was thinking of the bees. He flicked his ears trying not to come up with a snappy remark. He understood where his mother was coming from. "I know." Zestypaw said with a little purr.
His pelt still had mud in it once they had done picking out the twigs. 'Would you like some help with the mud and gunk?' his mother asked. He shook his head. "I'll clean it when I'm back." He sighed then added, "But could you help me get the honey?" Though most cats wouldn't think he was, Zestypaw was a mummy's boy. And was praying as he said these words to her that she will agree to get the honey with him. If she said no. Well then that would be a problem for her. He would go mad and storm off and maybe destory something. As Zestypaw has the wrost temper ever that any cat has had before. And though his mum meant the world, she could be a little bit of a pain....
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Post by Stella on Mar 5, 2011 15:10:05 GMT -5
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Post by Snowberry on Mar 8, 2011 12:02:26 GMT -5
OMG! I'm soo sorry! I was sure it was 200 words. Maybe I deteled some. [/blockquote]
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